MY FAVOURITE SINGERS
hello¡ my name is Lucia and ive got 12 years .i live in Salamanca (Spain) ive got a young brother, his name is Victor.my favourite color is pulple. My favourites hobbies are: ride a bike, talk with my friends and listening to music
One Direction is a british musc band
It's ok, Lucía but a little short. You could say something about their songs or why you like this band so much. And correct the spelling. Remember, capital letter at the beginning of a paragraph, after full stop and the pronoun "I".
ResponderEliminarCorrect: It's " I am 12 years old".